Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,229 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

See You! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

See you in a short while
For its a call of time
For I am slave of time
I can never refuse its call.
For its an order from lovely princess of time!

I often play hide and seek
I go on and off
If I am breathing in
I am sure to knock in you door!
See you in short while!

I met you somewhere
At some point of time
So far it was a
wonderful poetic journey
Travelled along with you
With sweet and bitter rhymes
In course of time.

On my journey towards my destination
A stop arrived in course of time.
It asked me to get down for a while.

Catch you in a while
When this journey,
Again comes my way,
Again when it will stop my way
I am sure to get in!

Life has many stops
On its way towards destination.
you may get down
you may not
No choice left for final stop!

Till then bye for a week
Enjoy your wonderful weekly ride of poetic journey
With melodious song, dance and music
Thereby hunting for treasure innumerable in measures
Enjoy the beauty of life singing
Christmas and New Year songs
On Chills of winter,
Listen to your echo in snow covered mountain
Snow will melt on hearing your echo of love.

Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we are blessed with
Enjoy the beauty of life
Looking through the window of musical poems.
See you in a short while from now!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Note. See you are after a short break!


Comments about See You! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 9,132 Points Madathil Rajendran Nair (4/10/2015 11:07:00 PM)

    Another beautiful poem - life with its beautiful stops, pauses and wayside entertainment till the final destination. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2015 9:16:00 PM)

    Nice lines...Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we are blessed with
    Enjoy the beauty of life....10

    What makes me to wonder?
    And thrill under
    Such a nice spell
    Verbally I can’t express or tell

    There is magnetic pull
    That keeps me cheerful
    I read your creation
    And float under its recreation (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (12/14/2014 1:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful write! again from you_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (12/7/2014 7:51:00 AM)

    I love this prompt wish as sweet a prayer. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (12/4/2014 11:08:00 AM)

    I met you somewhere at some point in time so far it was a wonderful poetic journey traveled along with you with sweet and bitter rhymes in course of time beautiful thought (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,859 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (12/4/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    No choice left for final stop.......A beautifully composed poem and meaningful of life it gives. likes it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,614 Points Savita Tyagi (12/1/2014 10:33:00 AM)

    Lovely composition! Enjoy your break! You will bring rhythm and beauty in whatever you are doing and wherever your journey is taking you. Loved your style. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,908 Points Lyn Paul (11/24/2014 5:54:00 AM)

    So beautiful Geetha... I think of you often and certainly will do over the festive season. Thank you x (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,480 Points Rajesh Thankappan (11/17/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    The motion of the poem was that of hustling time. Nice composition. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,107 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (11/15/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    I am sure to knock in you door!
    See you in short while! Excellent composition. Each line makes feeling of suitable realization. Enjoying beauty, with Christmas songs and watching snow covered mountains really gives one brief account of nature. That is why it is necessary to see for a while to nature's beauty. Excellent poem shared. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/14/2014 10:36:00 PM)

    See you in a short while For its a call of time thank you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (11/14/2014 12:51:00 AM)

    What a poetic way to say a temporary goodbye! Simply beautiful 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,730 Points Ramesh Rai (11/13/2014 3:17:00 PM)

    Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we
    are blessed with
    Enjoy the beauty of life
    Looking through the window of
    musical poems.
    See you in a short while from now! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,536 Points Amitava Sur (11/13/2014 12:18:00 AM)

    A lovely poetic way to take a leave. Wish you enjoy your holidays in peace with some more poems being rich.
    Loved it Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,045 Points Khalida Bano Ali (11/9/2014 5:09:00 AM)

    A sweet and lovely poem.......10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,798 Points Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (11/8/2014 6:30:00 PM)

    I often play hide and seek
    I go on and off
    If I am breathing in
    I am sure to knock in you door!
    See you in short while!
    Excellent stanza. Very meaningful. The entire poem shines with fine touch of your thoughts. Very nicely penned. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,540 Points Alesia Leach (11/8/2014 2:40:00 PM)

    A wonderfully penned poem about life's journey and time. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,759 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (11/7/2014 12:47:00 PM)

    Phenomenal write with touching words indeed....Geetha......outstanding (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,513 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/7/2014 5:54:00 AM)

    extraordinary poem with thoughts that i salute honestly........thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,776 Points Valsa George (11/7/2014 4:22:00 AM)

    On my journey towards my destination
    A stop arrived in course of time.
    It asked me to get down for a while.

    Where are you planning to disappear for the time being Geetha? So true, you make your appearance off and on!
    We are going to miss you! A beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, November 7, 2014


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