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Comments about this poem (* Send me a Love *
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Emma Adamyan (11/29/2009 11:07:00 PM)
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it can show an anguish that in ur heart lives... so sad poem. well written,10
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Nooruddeen MM (10/8/2009 1:20:00 AM)
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Excellent selections of the words
Good work too.
Tks
Rgds
Nooruddeen
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Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 8:36:00 AM)
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I get the feeling that your love is, as yet, unrequited. Oh - to have a muse - how it hurts, how it makes us pour forth our very souls.
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****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.****** A ThOuGhT MaTe (9/24/2009 1:25:00 AM)
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a wonderful passionated write, with a mysterious beautiful feeling.. I just do love your unique verses Suliman, , , , , , , , , , , ,
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Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire (8/15/2009 6:39:00 AM)
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Wow! Excellent style and carefully chosen words make this selection of words memorable. you'll be remembered through your writing one day when you're gone, something I wish for myself one day.
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Janet Tai (8/15/2009 5:24:00 AM)
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I love this! You are amazing! Your choice of words! I am speechless!
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Appleblossoms 2009 (8/7/2009 5:32:00 PM)
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I just read this again...and feel very uncomfortable about the word 'manure'....is there anything you could do to revise this line?
Rgds,
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