Graves are for words left
unsaid and deeds left undone,
and promises displeased
You stated an absolute truth, which is very a sad thing for human life.100+
A poignant and a meaningful write very well expressed in theses lines
Unsaid and deeds left undone seem to be humorous in this wise sharing. Graves are too amazing in left words. Wise sharing....10
I think this grave is brain's unconscious part, apparently dead buy affects our thoughts when conscious is dormant and sometimes sends us in a land of sweet and nightmares.dreams. A nice poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very profound Senryu, Mohammed. Thanks