The black hole gapes wide
Lower and lower I sink
Until sucked fully
The terrible experience of drowning described with perfection. And thats how we often feel when all hope is gone. So both in literal n metaphorical senses drowning couldnt have been described better.
Considering despair as a black hole is an amazing idea, and if it's a black hole then we are helpless before it. A thoughtful three liner.
Einstein's gravitational waves were caught recently. The power of the black hole is revealed.
Great brevity! Despair is depicted in just three brilliant lines. Beautifully crafted Senryu.
The Black Hole! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
'The black hole gapes'....the gradual process of sinking......! You have depicted volumes of despair in this short poem! The brevity of expression is adorable. Thanks dear madam for sharing....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow loved this new style of poetry Mam, Senryu,3 lines and 17 syllables! Beautifully written!