Senryu Poem Poem by Farzad Jahanbani

Senryu Poem

Rating: 4.3


All leaves fall down

Paint of last leaf on wall -

Dad paint life for Son*


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Sunday, July 03,2016
Poem 164

Tuesday, July 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dad,fall,leaf,leaves,life,senryu,son,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2016

very fine poem...... falling leaves in my imagination and painting of the leaf in my imagination. you have a created a picture in me..... thank you dear poet. tony

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 12 July 2016

With some one's desire and assistance, life continues, despite nature's laws involving senescence, fall, decay, degeneration etc. Nice write. Thanks for writing.

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Farzad Jahanbani 12 July 2016

Thanks, good & alive comment

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Gajanan Mishra 05 July 2016

dad paint life for son, good one.

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Farzad Jahanbani 05 July 2016

Thanks a lot

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M Asim Nehal 05 July 2016

Nicely penned...Falling leaves and painting by father are two different actions merged together.

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Farzad Jahanbani 05 July 2016

Your viewpoint is nice

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