This Woman Is Poem by Farzad Jahanbani

This Woman Is

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This woman is

Plastic

Hot

Nude

We are all faulty in her fall

With

Plastic wastes

Fossil fuels

Environmental disasters

And...

'Earth' is her name;

We all only watch that

Nude

Hot

Plastic

This woman is

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Sunday, February 26,2017
Poem 224

Sunday, February 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: disasters,earth,earth day,environment,loop,woman
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The form of this poem (in modern Persian Literature) is called 'Loop'; as the beginning and the end of the poem have the same words or sentences.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2017

Hot Nude We are all faulty in her fall very nice poem and how u connect it with earth, enviornment and disasters. thank you dear poet. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 April 2017

Very nice style. Liked the way you have finished the subject. Thanks for sharing.

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Farzad Jahanbani 17 April 2017

thanks for your spending time and nice comment

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Tom Billsborough 28 February 2017

This is similar to the idea of the French Rondeau and very effective. I might try doing one myself. I'll copy yours on to a Word Document and experiment with some ideas. Liked yours very much, Farzad.

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Farzad Jahanbani 28 February 2017

Thanks; great poet Compared with French Rondeau In this form we can create rhythmic or nonrhythmic poem. I composed Symmetric loop or 5-words loop poem too. Good luck

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