Heather Burns


Senryu The Moon - Poem by Heather Burns

The moon looking down
on the earth casting shadows
sets the night ablaze.












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Comments about Senryu The Moon by Heather Burns

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (10/4/2013 7:15:00 AM)

    ah...BEAUTIFUL....i loved the line, 'casting shadows sets the night ablaze'... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/3/2013 5:23:00 PM)

    except during the day when it can't penetrate the smog away. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (10/3/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    Short and full of imagery...lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,885 Points Sallam Yassin (10/2/2013 5:17:00 PM)

    flames lit night and dance
    with silhouettes
    Of moon's light/ sweet (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 11, 2014


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