The tide touches shore
splashing upon sand castles
washing dreams away.
Like the castle perhaps the dreams were ephemeral or just returned to the ocean of dreams.
no less better than the earlier on ei commented... excellent image you created with your words like a painter.. excellent......10
The reality of the life always takes some dreams from us from shores to the depth of oceans of life
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very true imagery. Beautiful senryu.