Senryu1 Poem by Negar Gorji

Senryu1

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Laughing out loud
Pinwheel whirls quickly
The little boy

Wednesday, September 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: comedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 July 2017

We know it is the boy laughing, but the word order shows the pinwheel laughing - so you create a double image of delight - both the boy's and the machine's

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