Shadows Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Shadows

Rating: 5.0


fighting to escape darkness
shadows reel me back in
echoing taunts of weakness
presenting me with a knife
bending to the command
a slave to the dagger in hand
as i drag it across my skin
bringing forth crimson release
blood flows from my veins
dropping the blade in shame
deafening silence surrounds
shadows retreating to corners
watching with unforgiving eyes
as darkness consumes again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cosmic Dreamer 11 November 2011

There is a darkness that lives within us all, for without darkness, light cannot exist... I hope you find the light... There is a beautiful agony about this poem... I love it...

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Dave Walker 11 November 2011

Once again another truly great poem about, real pain, and a dark side that not many people ever see or feel. A fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, dream world.

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Crimson Love 11 November 2011

This is a very dark yet beautiful poem. I found every line immaculate...... Truly amazing. :)

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Renu Kakkar 15 November 2011

a poem of intense pain.....well written

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Unwritten Soul 12 November 2011

I can feel the blood in my hand, your words so real and cool...a write that i can say a beautiful pain to read but yeah it pain to endure hahaha..i mean this is cool write :) , keep showing us your cool works_Unwritten Soul

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Dead Leaf 12 November 2011

lines filled with pain....i like it

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nice wording, perhaps i can realy feel the deepening emotions here

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Bernard Snyder 11 November 2011

This is an amazing 'write 'SG'! ! Very deep, dark, yet incredibly written! Nice! ! ! ! !

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