Show Me Poem by Monica Money

Show Me

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Love is weakness. It whispers. The minute you love, the minute you fall. If you love someone then it will tear and burn at your heart. For you will feel like a blackball that never gotten through the next level, even if you had given your all. Love will tear at your soul and shame you naked. Leave you bare and cold-hearted in a matter of seconds. Love will blacken the heart and leave you for the blame. which is such a shame. Love will ruin your mind. For you may think about them all the time. Love is weakness. It whispers again. But if love is weakness then show me what love really is? Show me the couples that are married. How they are so full and cheery. Show me how objects or items are loved. How can that be a weakness? Or better yet a shame? Show me how a person can be loved. Whether relative, a friend, or just a random pet on the street. Show me how parents are the symbol of weakness. How they love their child and spouse so endlessly. How they would die or suffer from the love they produce. Show me how love can be a weakness. When love is pure and altruistic. When love is not a weakness but rather a gift you receive from the heart. But if you say love is weakness then show me your heart.

Saturday, October 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,disappointment,heartbreak,love,strength
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Take this to heart my viewers! The only way to a true happy ending is not let you as in yourself get in the way. We go by this quote so many times being afraid that if we open ourselves up then life will destroy us, but in the process of being afraid we forget that we also have to live. Don't be afraid to live your life. The only way to be happy is to let yourself feel it instead of being afraid or pushing it aside.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 08 October 2016

Is love a weakness? Very difficult question to answer.

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Monica Money 11 October 2016

I would have to agree with you on this. Something to know about Poetry is that we can write something that can be amazing or may be even bad, but at the end of the day when we reread our works we ask ourselves these very same questions. Is love a weakness? This is a internal conflict that goes on in people day to day bases of life. Just know to live and be free. Be happy and don't be afraid.

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