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Shut doors
Doors shut on the face
By the force of destiny
Leave trepidations tiny
The precept of the appearance
The glaze of the mahogany
Has much to do with mutual disharmony
The persistence of spirits
That tireless knocks on shut door
Leaves impatient brunt feelings on soar
Yet; precept apart
Life is tart
Yet if all games left apart
Realities on doors knock
Has to the perceptive little shock
Let us with cool smile, tactful elegance unlock!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Malinikadir
maalini kadir
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Monday, February 23, 2009 |
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Sunday, May 16, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (Shut doors
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maalini kadir
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N Olmedo (6/6/2009 2:01:00 AM)
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A thoughtful write indeed
Realities on doors knock
Has to the perceptive little shock
Let us with cool smile, tactful elegance unlock!
I like the tactful elegance unlock as it gives it a sort of light at the end of the tunnel sort of feel to the poem. Thank you for sharing :)
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Rosalinda Martinez (5/24/2009 9:18:00 PM)
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I like that cool smile. Continue with your self expressions... thanks
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Lalitha Iyer (2/24/2009 12:35:00 AM)
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Dear Malini, so still the doors are shut.
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