nader baheri

Silence Dream - Poem by nader baheri

In the depth of a dark and intimidating valley
In your silence dream
With mouths remained open
Against the silence
You see her
Flying up toward you
From the depth of deviancy degradation
Crawling toward you
In the silence
You see her bloody yellow teeth
Hollowing the empty air
Cutting the air aimlessly
And you screaming silently in your silence dream
And she laughing at you loudly in your silence dream
And swallowing you to the depth of that intimidating valley

Comments about Silence Dream by nader baheri

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/9/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    ur poem reminds me of some of my nightmares in which i wanna shout but the more i try the more i fail....i guess u wrote this piece after a bad nightmare or u imagined it....any was kindda unique! ! i enjoyed...thanx! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 402 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/8/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    well, well... I read your poem. Is she a cannibal angel? hehe! I like the oxymoron (Screaming Silently) . It's nice.The Valley which is a part of nature ay look beautiful and merciful for a Romantic poey. For you it's more like Naturalistic view. Nice. I was more Romantic in the previous years. But I now know that nature is really indifferent to me as a part of herself... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/20/2013 4:19:00 PM)

    this sounds more like a night mare. good imagery (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,486 Points Patricia Grantham (7/10/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    Such an eerie description of a dream. We have all had dreams some
    good and others not so good. Whatever it was I am so glad you woke
    up! Very interesting write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 489 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/9/2013 8:09:00 AM)

    an eerie silence/ a good poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,667 Points Unwritten Soul (7/4/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    Is this a ghost movie or what? LOL_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,880 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/29/2013 8:21:00 AM)

    silence dream, good write, thanks.
    I am grateful to you, (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (6/29/2013 6:59:00 AM)

    Some kind of a nightmare, right? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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