madness loudly echoes
cracked pieces shatter
tearing through the silence
awakening vivid nightmares
flesh becoming canvas
scribbled upon by the mind
beautiful chaos emptying
spilling hidden memories
clawing secrets intertwine
painfully mixing colors.
twisting horror and beauty
razor blade brush strokes
paint this contorted reality
scarred crimson carvings
scream the haunted stories
shattering silent madness
I really like the way you weave in an out creating a tapestry of thought and action. Grl, you have opened the flood gates of creativity.
Agree with C. You build up the tension, then back off to hold the reader rapt. Excellent sweets!
Some quite interesting lines, nicely pened.. I love it The_African_Son
A filigree work indeed! the appropriate but only the content words are used to paint the picture! this is a great work...
Silentpoet Grl, you have painted a picture, a masterpiece... Need I say more? ; -) -Kelly.
It takes a lot to come up with a good poem but you girl you write beautiful poetry every time, Ive been reading your poems and not one of them is out of place your words flow from one to next, you capture your readers, your brillant.
I love your poems, they are beautiful and tragic. I wish to see more from you.
Beau-tific and horrific at the same time. Would like to see what you could paint with a cutlass in your hand!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
OMG new work from SPG! I was wondering where you were haha. This is fantastic and I agree with Carlos in that the words wrap and weave around each other beautifully. Nicely done.