Simple Verse- 27.Take A Day Off Poem by Valsa George

Simple Verse- 27.Take A Day Off

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Don’t ever be in sick hurry
Take a respite from all your worry
Occasionally steal a moment to enjoy
Look at life in a spirit of joy

Watch the beauty of the day
Let no work come your way
To free yourself from the grinding strife
Take part in the joyous surge of life

Come out of your gloomy den
Mix with like- minded men
The best way to have peaceful rest
Is to seek comfort in Nature’s breast

See the flowers growing in row
Admire the carnation’s purple glow
Look at the jasmines twined in crescent
Smell their intoxicating scent

Take a stroll along the sandy shore
Feel the kiss of the salubrious air
Listen to the roar of wild waves
Watch how the water in anger raves

To wind off the day to a beautiful end
Seek the company of a loving friend!
For a day, steer clear of all your care
In the merry round of life, have a share

Tuesday, December 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 01 December 2015

Yes, we need a recess from the fatigues of day to day routines. We must have a day for rest and recreation.

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Rajnish Manga 01 December 2015

Occasionally steal a moment to enjoy Look at life in a spirit of joy That should be the spirit. So much joy is there to be discovered in umpteen things around us but what we need is a moment away from the dreariness of our lives. Lovely poem. Thanks.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 December 2015

A soothing poem with beautiful rhyme imbedded in it. Enjoyed the bits of advice delivered. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 01 December 2015

There is no sense in worry, it solves nothing ands elf replicates. Time off, to clear the mind and focus on beauty, can be a wonder drug.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2015

Occasionally taking a moment to read such a marvelous poem is very amazing definitely listening to roar of wild waves. Very wise and amazing poem shared here interestingly...10

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Siddartha Montik 22 December 2016

So much nature spilled.. ake a stroll along the sandy shore Feel the kiss of the salubrious air Listen to the roar of wild waves Watch how the water in anger raves Feel the Kisses of that Air and listen to enjoy Waves and their Roar! Nice write Thank you Poet! ! 10+++! !

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Kavya . 16 December 2015

nice one - yes we all need a break from the hectic life routine - go for an outing with whom you enjoy company - breath the refreshed air and have some time for ourselves. a gud write Mam.

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Om Chawla 14 December 2015

A nice piece of advice and so very well penned. Even though all of us may be aware of this escape route from the drudgery of grinding strife we still fail to come out of the gloomy den where we find ourselves locked in. A ver meaningful advice, Valsa.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 December 2015

We all need a rest in life at times. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 02 December 2015

Nice piece of advice, one should take moments to enjoy...work, work, work no play and enjoyment makes Jack a dull boy..Well said madam.

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