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surya . (3/29/2010 9:58:00 PM)
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BEAUTIFUL WRITE.GREAT THOUGHT LINES.
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SURYA
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Alf Hutchison (1/19/2010 2:57:00 PM)
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Deependra you have a wonderful way with words...I have said it before and I say it again... you are an excellent poet... thanks for the invite Regards Alf
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Reshma Ramesh (1/19/2010 11:54:00 AM)
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filled with best wishes........good one!
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Jordan Legaspi (1/14/2010 10:15:00 PM)
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yes the sky is all yours...meaning you are free to dream, to do something about it, to face its chalenge, and of course to be what you are after all...
the poem is an expression of deep concern to someone (as your dedication stated) ...however, it should be noted that freedom is always something you are bound with, 'we are born free, to be found in it'...thanks for the poem.
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Kesav Easwaran (1/11/2010 8:51:00 PM)
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'...........................time
to reflect on past glories
to bury bitter memories
to match a flowing stream
to catch the next dream'...
quoted lines are poetic good...bring in a wish an attitude that's good...
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C. P. Sharma (1/11/2010 8:12:00 PM)
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Sincere wishes from heart
The poetic rhythm impart.
CP
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Marieta Maglas (1/10/2010 1:55:00 AM)
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Excellent extended simile:
Yesterday’s gone
like disappearing clouds
like vanishing stars
like passing twilight
like fading moonlight
and excellent visual surrealistic metaphor:
give wings to your dreams
Excellent symbolistic poem, very well expressed
10++++++++++++
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Bob Blackwell (1/10/2010 1:10:00 AM)
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We must grab all of life's opportunities with both hands. I wish your friend well as he continues his studies.
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Lady Grace (1/9/2010 11:47:00 PM)
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well expressed..nicely done..expressive
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