Smile Poem by simran arora

Smile

Rating: 5.0


Fortunately people say,
that i am nice,
they too adore,
that i have a way with my life...

They honour me as if,
i am intrusting,
and honour of spice...

Fortunately, people say,
that i am nice,
with a most beautiful complement
to my million doler's smile,

a smile that fishes many out on the streets,
a smile that makes me feel loud,
a smile that fregmens my deeds,
a smile that rules as lead,
a smile that dress me up,
a smile that pampers me
in a specl stuf,
a smile that motivates me and my life,
a smile that makes me feel and think bright,

fortunately people say,
that i am nice,
with a charm of thoughts touching the heights....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenie Franksay 24 June 2013

i think you need to improve your spellings. you are talented undoubtly.

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Hans Vr 22 June 2013

You are really fortunate if people say you are nice So many people never get this compliment But then most of the nice-ness comes from within. If people do notiice you are nice. that means you are radiant from the inside. So many smiles go unnoticed but if a smile comes from the heart it is the most beautiful smile we can see I love the write. I suggest you write in verses. the way it is presented is more like prose

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