So You Had Your Mother's Eyes Poem by Patti Masterman

So You Had Your Mother's Eyes



So you had your mother's eyes-
I had wondered what inky abyss
you had to have fallen through,
to acquire those half-cooled coals-
although in her, the effect was more benign,
as if gentled by age or cataracts.

It is the only definite physical fact of you
that I have now,
the last information unlocked
from the vast reservoir of ignorance
that we all seem to encounter,
surrounding one anothers histories
and beginnings.

I had forgotten part of your name
but after many searchings,
I came across the truth of those eyes
(and knew I had found a part of you, within them)
even the screen's muted glowing,
and the decades of years
couldn't extinguish those fires.

And now I am haunted by the image
of a dark-eyed, motherless child
crying with exhaustion,
in a deep underground mine
full of slowly extinguishing coals

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 April 2011

Great poem with strong sentiments. Very well observed. Great imagery. The style is quite simple yet appealing and hitting the target. Excellent poetry. Thanks for sharing..... Please read my new poem if you don't mind.

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