Deep down the forest lay a hard piece of rough stone
It's surface as turbulent as rough weather
Haunted and hidden for many years
from the touch of sharp eagle eyes to the powerful rays of sun.
Years had made peculiar marks of ages on its surface.
Visible were the traces of deep wounds of cracks and pores,
which made it heartless on each passing days.
Away from all
Untouched by love
Noticed by none
that added just ugliness to its beauty of love.
On a fine sunny day
A lovely stream crossed its way.
Roughness of the stone got melted away
with the warmness and sweetness of the stream
that went flowing down its way.
It covered the stone with its flow of love
and healed the painful wounds of cracks and pores
with its soft touch of love.
The love, which was never felt like before,
made it more glowing and loving day by day.
With just a soft touch of love...
Melted the heart of the stone!
Well! It just started sparkling once again like the precious stone.
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.
Geetha Jayakumar.
So as the stone has lost its rough edges and the cuts and marks it bore, with the touch of loving currents, you have started to glow like a precious stone with the touch of LOVE.... great comparison! Enjoyed the poem, Geetha! Instead of 'unnoticed by none', make it 'noticed by none'!
: -) . very nicely expressed lovely thoughts. hard work and nice poem.
Away from all Untouched by love Unnoticed by none... nice lines..10 love can polish can give good finish can turn devil into gentleman.. love can do anything
Weathered stone symbolizing ages, smoothed by touch of stream symbolizing love. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
gud one............ touched my soul........... lovely