Song (Crystalline Poem) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Song (Crystalline Poem)



'Beneath the shadow of the song
lies the heartache that only she knows.'

Thursday, February 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 February 2016

A nice crystalline poem similar in title to my poem Their Song -Crystalline Poem. I had to change the title for net search convenience as this would point to similar poems in similar forms. There was a writer on Poemhunter who did this kind of title duplication and his name was Aldo Kraas. I hope you'd be more RESOURCEFUL in using titles for your poems - there are a million words in the dictionary we can choose from. Instead of duplicating titles or recently posted poems. I think Filipinos are better than that.

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