Sonnet 07 Poem by doug bentley

Sonnet 07

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my heart's prophecy foretells your absence
though mind for this no reason can give,
predicting soon removal from my presence
of your form, yet form within must live.

and if within, then by which robber
shall that form be stolen? if i'm the thief
who removes such treasure, spiriting other
self away, inconstant proves my love's belief.

shall it be said that my love is untrue
and be found inconstant, as passing vain?
then justice make unmerciful, law eschew,
wisdom make folly, all my sins retain.

your form, by law, must constant shine,
proving my heart heir to robber mind.

Friday, July 13, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: lies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 13 July 2012

Loved the flow, tenderness and yes, logic in this love poem! Great write, very very enjoyable!

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