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Unwritten Soul


Soul of Two


Curse of the night
Broken it's spell on you
By a wish of midnight's voice
And light memo from sunprincess
Rejoined all the wishes in the sky
Blinking light as blessing stars
Candles you many hearts
Wishes that glow many nights
Even no light from me to you
Not even the lame one, I'm no bright,
But please hold your eyes tight
As i maybe not seen there
Unwritten in the sky
Defeated by the color of night
Because i am a color of wind
Then sense me with no sight
Taste my existence in purely feel
When you have faith in me, In your heart
Twisted fate tied our journeys
Locked in a new state of destiny
Collides our minds in a time
It holds our hearts of two
Reformed in a harmony
Link across our words
As a twin soul, it seems true
Like In a dream of universe
Birth ourselves a new world,
Crust of trust made by you
Dense me into a loyal core
And we there stand together
Around the center of our light
Our shared soul,
A soul of two

Even in a sleep
Upon your sight
In heart, after the eyes
Read what we have written
From all friends for you
A wish and prayers
In your whole day of bliss
Bless your birthday
May you find Joy
And to remember again
What you always do, stay true
Another reason wise embraces thou

Submitted: Wednesday, February 06, 2013
Edited: Monday, February 11, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A soul of two is actually a title of the picture i did for Jahan Zaib
The painting of two trees in a orbit around a bright core, a soul
shared...if a soul broken, both trees will be faced the same
not just one...Inspired by his true friendship with his loyal friend
Saeed jan. And this poem i wrote, also dedicated to Jahan for his birthday Happy Birthday my dear friend..Happy birthday, I wish you
the best of the best wishes, you gain more experience mark now, Be wiser! and to Thomas and Rachel, I am using your name (midnight voice
and sunprincess...as you both are his friends in PH, I know you are wishing him birthday too if you know) So i sum up as behalf of Jahan's friend into a poem just for you my friend..for my dear friend, Jahan
Happy Birthday Jahan..keep smiling on next journey!

Comments about this poem (Soul of Two by Unwritten Soul )

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  • Nader Baheri (2/12/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    great poem to your friend
    your friend must praise this.i think you and your friend bound with eachother.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Ketan Hukare (2/9/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    Dear Soul
    Your poem brought tears in my eyes, could feel love for your dear friend.
    My vote is TEN
    All the best! ! (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (2/7/2013 5:53:00 AM)

    Nothing more to say.
    Thank you Dear Soul. I am proud to be your friend.
    Thanks Sunpricess (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (2/7/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    dear soul, I also have a couple of wishes to share,
    the first one is for jahan to have the best birthday
    ever and the second one if God is so willing for
    all of us on poemhunter to remain friends for the
    rest of our lives..oh yea by the way I love your poem! (Report) Reply

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