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Sound of war

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Bum! Bum! Bum!
Sound of war
it's like the roaring of a lion
I the jungle.

Sound of war,
It's like flash of the lightening.
Sound of war,
It make people lose their strength.
Sound of war,
It make people to run to and fro

Sound of war,
Um...
Sound of war,
Make people hopeless
when there is hope
Sound of war is cruel,
Because it make people shudder
It make people suffer, shudder shiver, cringe
And due before they die.

Sound of war
Oops!
Ouch!
Phew!

Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012
Edited: Saturday, December 15, 2012


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Sound of war

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  • Leslie Philibert (8/16/2012 12:02:00 PM)

    Great idea, well written

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