Lonely Poem by Ejalonibu Abraham

Lonely

Rating: 5.0


Darkness is all over the shadow
Loneliness ice my heart
Pleasant days and nights no more
Heart cries header and header
Pains is more the than cutting of a dagger
Her absence wiped out the happiness
My mind is slowly bending
It cripples out in agony.
My face is reddish and gloomy
Eyes fall of tears like lead-pencil
My eyes begin to rain.

The world is so silent
In winter star still spark
The moon is cold
Soul is dying of catarrh
Loneliness burnt my heart into ashes
It flows like whisky in veins
Whisper like ocean's wind
I feel you should be with me at night
Cover me with your tick lion skin
Because I'm dying of loneliness

Thursday, September 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poet remember his love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2020

Heart wrenching poem, beautifully conveyed, dear young poet! I like your poems very much. Keep creating/ writing poems Gradually you know the way to all doors here on Poem Hunter, sure. 5 stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2020

A vivid depiction of loneliness. Deeply poignant.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 September 2020

Loneliness burnt my heart into ashes/// oh! the loneliness sometimes you come as blessings, sometime as curse; what'll be mine- where I'm still nothing.......

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Chinedu Dike 24 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings... A poignant bit of verse. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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