ramesh rai

Gold Star - 18,458 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Stars Are Playing - Poem by ramesh rai

Stars are playing throughout night
wide sky has become playground
Moon has become the football
stars are playing all over night
Great bear is the referee of game
there are more stars watching the match
as the audience of the match
all stars player played with full spirit
Finally, the morning star declared the result
the match ended with thank-offering of sun
the entire creation rejoiced the game throughout day.


Comments about Stars Are Playing by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/2/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    Wow...beautiful poem....Football match played well..well written. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (6/25/2013 8:26:00 PM)

    It was an all star game with late innings in a tie game decided by a goal when the sun got
    in the goalies eyes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (6/25/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    As a Football fan I enjoyed this.
    Footballers often say after a game that they're over the Moon, now we know why! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,074 Points Valsa George (6/23/2013 11:54:00 PM)

    What a splendid match played on the firmament on all days of fair weather and how we watch it sitting in our balconies and galleries! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/23/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    beautiful poem
    greatly penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/23/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    Superb poem, beautifully written.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,674 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 7:56:00 AM)

    Great imagination and beautifully written with panache! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,418 Points David Wood (6/22/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    This poem flows very well, a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,149 Points Elena Sandu (6/21/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, loved it! Next time when I will have my eyes on stars may try to imagine your poem. I think you were very brave to follow the entire game. Could I resist, the end may find me in deep sleep. Or maybe then my dreams would create a different game? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (6/21/2013 11:15:00 AM)

    A great poem with a great flow to it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,216 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/20/2013 8:39:00 PM)

    Stars are playing and more stars watching. Nicely written poem. Please read my poem 'Counting Stars' which is in line with yours. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 21, 2013


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