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Trinidad Villafranca (1/9/2009 9:48:00 AM)
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I <3 it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You left me speachless once again
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Tyease Collins (8/11/2008 12:40:00 PM)
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Exactly how i feel.
You caught the emotion definately in this poem.
I love it <3
**Tess c.**
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Keith Foley (8/10/2008 12:24:00 AM)
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So far just read this one poem and the Titles. Great potential. Love your titles. If you read only one poem (of mine) read 'One more kiss'.
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Anjali Sinha (8/6/2008 8:39:00 PM)
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Hey Tim, ---hope this is only a figment of your imagination and nothing serious. Na no one is worth that much---your life is more precious remember that. We are all here and love you. Anyways great write (but hope only a fiction) . Keep writing. ++++10 to you
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Blessing Nanier (8/5/2008 12:59:00 PM)
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woah, u are talented.that's all i cn really say. woah
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B. R. Hawkins (8/5/2008 12:57:00 PM)
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Deep, profound words. Great work!
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~crazy/beautiful~ (8/2/2008 1:18:00 PM)
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this is a very beautiful but short and simple poem.i, at one point in my life, felt this way.w/ 1 small difference 2 this poem.4 me i was w/out the comfort of him.keep it up
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