The sweet sun fading over the silent horizon,
The same moon slowly showing to them each
The secrecy was gone, and the light began to fade
Sliding over us, beyond the others reach,
Quietly rising, through air thick with silent melodies
Full moonlight, only able to please
Suffering the insomnia, the sleepless night
Staring only at the stolen light
On two sides of the world, both can see
The fluid poetry that moves the sea
The luminous orb, floating in air
From both places, they see the other there
Together, separate, single apart
They have but a single heart
Very nice. I like the whole poem, but that last couplet could stand as a poem on it's own. Lovely verse.
This is very nice, I especially like the last four stanza's, keep up the good work!
You said that the moon was the poetry that moved the sea. Your poetry is the song that moves the heart. Very beautiful.
I like how u used the words it's very discriptive I love watching the moon...
Excellent writing and very descriptive, truly gifted. Keep writing! ! Phebe
Truly a masterpiece. Your writing shows maturity. I like this poem.
I'm delighted to read all your poetry and will. Nice work can't hardly believe your only 15. Your ahead of yourself in writing, a real talent.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Together, separate, single apart They have but a single heart A beautiful climax! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +10 to you lil fren regards anju