Sun, Don't You Shine! ! …[ Written On A Sunny Day; Very Short; ½ True; Humor? ] Poem by Bri Edwards
Sun, Don't You Shine! ! …[ Written On A Sunny Day; Very Short; ½ True; Humor? ]
'Wear your Sun Block! ', my wife did whine.
Instead, ….. I ORDERED the Sun …..not to shine,
whereupon the yellow orb quickly hid …………
behind a massive cloud.
Yes Sir, yes Ma'am, …………..it DID!
(December the 16th, …..2017)
It hid? It really did? Bri, you must not have been...in Madrid (no clouds) . Well done....humour and a quick, perfect delivery.
Now I understand that you are a Superman who has control over all elements and even the stars and constellations! Simple and sweet!
You are brilliant and your this poem is very brilliant. Interesting humor is expressed in this amazing poem. Cloud covers the sun and we do not see sunshine. But certainly sun rays fall on skin at morning helps skin in preparing vitamin D. Wonderful thoughtful poem is shared...10
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5/3/2024 10:21:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I am not sure if the sun did hide Or you’re taking us all for a ride Thanks Bri