Of your whispering eyes
Voiceless tears falling
...
Where the thick dark air rashes in
Where the cold wind and breathe on my skin
Where the red quiet moon appears shadow less
Under the light we kissed in every passing silence tears
Where our hands touched, unshaken
My soreness deepened
A pang of sorrow it lies
But peerless and hating strife feeling
Fearsome days might I fear
But I used to think I would die
There hopelessly on the green grass I lie
To fare the uncounted dreams I dreamed
And a desolate crib I lived
Longing to taste it
again
And to ease the dark fading
pain
Moments may unravel
Nights may bright
If only beauty phase as it is at night
The smell of your skin
Defeats the sadness as u sleep
I’ll keep u worm
Until death tire us apart
Of your tipsy eyes,
Yet, it is Wet and deep
But u may
weep
my sweet, my soul, my heart
Another well crafted poem. Your choice of words and how they flow are amazing. Please keep writing and share it with the world. You do have so much time.
sad. bu tat least they got to kiss in this one! (: i love it.
Again very nice..but sad.. i think u should add a little happines to ur poems
accepting that the love you once had and enjoyed so won't have you anymore is so hard. you feel hopeless and unloved and the pain consumes your every piece of joy. this is pain that we all never trully recover from but wer need because it teaches us alot about ourselves and helps us value others more take heart. it will pass
This style of composition, of short sentences favours the rhythm, and emotional content, and flows.
Hope will defeat all the sadness and wish for the better night to compose your strength. May bright day lights and family keep your faith deeper and sharper. Well done>
Sadness with a glimpse of hope and desire. By the way...why so sad?
An anchorage of fight...perhaps the glory await in the garrison of Liberty...good concept...God bless...a 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
full of emotion, and well delivered...keep writing!