Thank God, Oh God(75) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Thank God, Oh God(75)

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Thank god,
For The knowledge you offered me,
But to be used in right way is within my hand.

Thank god,
For the birth you gave me through my mother,
Where she took me to right path.

Thank god,
For the education you presented me through my father,
But he took me to successfull life.

Thank god,
Allowing me to learn the good or bad in society.
Where it was challenging with society by vindicating.

Thank god,
The shelter and food you offered me,

But I understand, It is with me to secure the needs you offered me.

Thank god,
The power of realization offered me,
Where I understand the realization is to rectify my mistakes myself.

Thank god,
Giving me good readers to read my poems,
Where the readers from somewhere in the corner.

Thank god,
For giving me a power of diversion towards the peace,
When I feel sorrow.

Thank god,
Presenting me a happiness,
Although I'm lonely.

Thank god,
For the friends offered me,
Sharing sorrow or happiness with each other.

But,
Oh god,
Sometimes, somewhere, somehow, someone,
Hurts the integrity of the nation,
Oh god,
Sometimes, somewhere, someone,
Hurts the hinge of poverty.
Somewhere, someone,
Hurting the others soul of heart.
Somewhere, somehow, someone,
Hurting his health through unhygienic habits,
Sometimes, somewhere, somehow, someone,
Hurting his peace,
Also peace of his family.
Oh god,
Someone, somewhere,
Harms the flora and fauna.
Someone, somewhere,
Destroys the environment through his unhygienic habits.
Oh god,
Even,
Someone destroys the culture.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2017

Oh! marvellous ideas. Good items are presented by thanking to God.The most remarkable lines are.Someone, somewhere, Harms the flora and fauna. Someone, somewhere, Destroys the environment through his unhygienic habits. Oh god, Even, Someone destroys the culture. Thanks for sharing. ...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2017

God gives right knowledge and helps in using this in right way in hand. This is God who give you good readers to read your poems. You are ever thankful to God is great. God's mercy helps us in righteous living here. Very nice thanksgiving poem is shared.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2017

Ran, this is a beautiful poem you have written. It is so important to realise that we are lucky to be born as human beings. We need to reflect on it daily and thank the Lord for his Grace. Thank god, For The knowledge you offered me, But to be used in right way is within my hand. Thank god, For the birth you gave me through my mother, Where she took me to right path. Thank god, For the education you presented me through my father, But he took me to successfull life. For these positive thoughts a full vote of 10+++ for you. :)

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Valsa George 16 March 2017

God has gifted us with so many beautiful things! Unfortunately man is not thankful to Him, instead he successively destroys and harms Nature and the well springs of life. A Thoughtful write!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 March 2017

A great poem, it's man who is destroying beauty of this earth and now he is moving to space. I am afraid he will destroy the beauty of space, too. But nature is mighty enough to stop him.

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Ryson Dsouza 13 March 2017

Good one...Gratitude expressed.. Keep thanking the lord..

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