abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 41 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Thanks Giving


At the surface Thank you
Thanks for coming and being
Coming into my life and
Being as part of my heart.

From the depth Thank you
Thanks for making me alive
Alive in the material relations
Thanks for getting so closer
Closer to the core and edges.

Thank you so much and very much
For giving me the joy
Joys of moment's life
Thanks for making me smile
Smile for no reason
Still meant for ever thanking.

Thank you so much
For playing a wild game
Of comfort and need
Thanks for that spark of hope
By which the play was in success
Heart felt thanks for your talks
Talks with active and lazy strategies.

Thanks for the things and time
Things for remembrance and
Time to forget that remembrance
Thanks for everything you did for me
For sometime in cult very difficult
Thanks for utilizing me at your best
And making my life at my rest
Thanks for creating a fake world.

Thanks for ruining me and my nights
Thanks for the heart killing
Where love was not willing
Thanks to admit your cause
For getting me under huge loss.

Thank you so much for stopping
Stopping my breath when it started to breath.

Oh my love

If you are rejected at the heaven and hell
Or thrown ed for destroying me
As God will never forgive nor Satan
Hold your nerves and return
Come back to me with your wandering soul
Touch my flames on my ashes
I may or may not forgive you.

Dedicated to my material world.

Submitted: Wednesday, August 14, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 15, 2013

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  • Rookie - 5 Points marvin brato (10/6/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    Excellent narration, being grateful to everything that we have or who we are in this world would meant we express our gratitude to God who created everything! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shahzia Batool (8/18/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    One can write such deep passionate lines when his input to the world was extremely selfless...! ! ! (Report) Reply

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