abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 55 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

A Critical Span - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Life is guided by fate
Fate is guided by her talk
Fate can wait for her
She has the divine gift
To make you sleep in few seconds
As its she who can
Take your life in a span
I swear on her
She never knows about herself
But i have a doubt
Wheather she thinks well
Or goes only with worst.


Comments about A Critical Span by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (1/23/2012 3:13:00 PM)

    Intresting love the wording but not sure about the content (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Uguru-okorie Joseph (1/20/2012 4:45:00 AM)

    Hey man, the poem is awesome and I love it.Be focused and don't mind what people comment, what you are is in you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Virginia Pecho Gely (1/14/2012 11:05:00 AM)

    I read someone write that you should be careful with your spelling. Don't mind it. As long as you are understood, this is the most important thing in writing. Grammary, etc...is secondary.
    I love your styles....This one is simple but full of essences of life...In French we say Merci.(Thank you) . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Divya Divya B (11/14/2011 1:37:00 AM)

    a well directed satire on some one. good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Gurdon (11/9/2011 3:47:00 AM)

    Short and sweet. Awesome poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (11/5/2011 5:34:00 AM)

    great poem brother, who are you talking about...lol! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie grame peele (11/2/2011 2:57:00 AM)

    you have made the title and theme interesting. i think you are speaking about some girl other than your girl.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie lover of poetry sweet (9/2/2011 8:42:00 AM)

    superb style of mocking (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Vipins Puthooran (8/25/2011 8:04:00 AM)

    Hi,
    Love has ceartain sprigged virtues in our life.. Stay awake our mind to fight with fate..a good piece of work..I rate u a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Jose (6/24/2011 9:22:00 AM)

    true, brother, love can bring about a whole change. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Pamuditha Zen Anjana (6/2/2011 10:21:00 AM)

    Simple, smooth and subtle..yet it's stunning! ! ! ! Good one! ! ! ! Hats off! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Elizabeth Mpanga (4/26/2011 5:41:00 AM)

    love makes you see things you never thought you would. just be careful on your spellings.

    great thought though (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, June 3, 2011


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