Chuck Audette

Rookie - 0 Points (Poetry Hell, Vermont)

That Snow Poet (That's No Poet?) - Poem by Chuck Audette

Ahhh, the fresh canvas of new fallen snow
and the promise of beer-bloated bladder
no pencil, but my pen is, well, you know..
(to a true poet, size doesn't matter)

I claim nothing such, but this mighty oak
begs for a sonnet or three
so upon it I plant acorny joke
and spout forth my pee-a-tree

and I saved some ink, too, for the crisp clean ground
and my rhymes were sharp and biting
but my publisher says a deceit they have found
for it was my wife's handwriting!


Comments about That Snow Poet (That's No Poet?) by Chuck Audette

  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (9/18/2007 12:38:00 PM)

    LOL! ! ! I don't know how this one escaped me before... Love the puns in this one! ! Acorny joke? ? ! ! Groan! ! ! ...: -)
    Hugs,
    Dee (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Barry Van Allen (5/2/2007 8:45:00 PM)

    Chuck,
    Snow way to treat a lady,
    This is what you need to know,
    You are below the ice ...
    that lies beneath the snow...
    Giving her the credit is not the same ...
    as giving her the blame... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Careful with that dogma, my karma might hit it . (2/9/2007 4:46:00 AM)

    Joyously witty and you made me laugh. Loved it.
    Ez (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points alice sunderland (2/6/2007 12:38:00 PM)

    brilliant. and gets better and better with more readings. sod you! al (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Dorn (2/3/2007 1:23:00 PM)

    Charles, this certainly belongs among your best of the best... I'm afraid there's no telling what you'll pen next! Brilliantly funny! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (2/2/2007 11:21:00 PM)

    This is delicious Chuck - there is something eternal and magical about males peeing in snow - lemon letters'n all. Love the silliness and the puns in this one. Gorgeous light-hearted verse. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Danny Reynolds (2/2/2007 3:48:00 AM)

    Direct well the fountain
    Though the neighbours may all point
    Your hands nice and warm
    Holding onto my ball, point? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (2/1/2007 4:02:00 PM)

    A little flaky perhaps, but very (n) ice. Oh Mr A, see what you've done to me? !
    Hugs
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (2/1/2007 12:43:00 PM)

    There snow doubting you are the master of wordplay - pure genius Chuck. Love it. Justine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tara very irritated with PH injustice (2/1/2007 4:25:00 AM)

    Tee hee hee hee hee hee hee! C, this is simply brilliant. t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Esther Leclerc (1/31/2007 11:21:00 PM)

    This about covers every joke one could mine on the subject, Chuck! Shame on you for not giving the wife credit all this time... ; ] Fun puns and wordplay throughout, but then hey, you're the master! Est : ] (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, January 7, 2011


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