The Branches Of A Tree In Storm Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

The Branches Of A Tree In Storm

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No control we have and no power.
Like the branches of a tree in storm, our
Lives are here run
In darkness of the night and in the sun.

Only the fools among the crowd
Boast of strength and feel proud
As if they were Pharaohs. When they get drowned
Into the fathomless failure of life, their crowns
Seem to be dust
So fast
And then they cry
Before they die but their eyes remain stone-like dry.

We are like the branches of a tree in a storm.
We look for only His mercy who forms
And who destroys
Like toys.

Friday, November 8, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,nature,satire of social classes
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Submissiveness to God
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 December 2013

Such a poetic didactic allusion to life n human attitudes. Splendid great poem.

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Hazel Durham 14 November 2013

We sway and sometimes fall in the wind like leaves scattering our emotions around on the cold unforgiving ground. To believe in God is to set us free from the destruction of our souls! Beautiful write!

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Shish Mohammad 08 November 2013

Life is so uncertain, so little but so beautiful.

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 08 November 2013

A nice idea presented very nicely.

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Sayeed Abubakar

Sayeed Abubakar

Jessore / Bangladesh
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