Warren Falcon

Rookie - 327 Points (04/23/52 - xxxx / Spartanburg, South Carolina, USA)

The Case For Love As Storm - Poem by Warren Falcon

for Crimson Love


This can only go well.

I hold your hand
throughout the storm.

We swell together.
Two seeds break open.

I day your arbor.
You arbor my need.

Let us not plead our
case for love as storm.

Here we are warm in the park after
dark beneath the newspaper wet.

Stained with ink we are that fading
photograph of the bride and groom.

We are marked most likely
to flower in any season.

Caution thrown to wind,
blind lightning stabs the dark.

Sparks kindle perimeter pines.
The park is aflame.

The music of the gazebo gutter
waltzes clumsily on.

We make a run for it.

The dance is close.

It is now.

It is ours.


Comments about The Case For Love As Storm by Warren Falcon

  • Rookie - 65 Points Crimson Love (10/10/2011 1:32:00 AM)

    beautiful poem ;) I enjoyed it a lot :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/9/2011 11:59:00 PM)

    Truely like this poem! Makes one really want to throw caution to the wind and make a run for it...if only one was sure it will last... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,725 Points Dave Walker (10/8/2011 12:03:00 PM)

    Like it good poem. Good write.
    May i invite you to read my poem
    Called, powers that be. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 15, 2011


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