Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,936 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

The Corrupt - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A policeman stands
knowing his lies
have just destroyed
a life

But like a snake
That eats itself
it will all come
back around

Comments about The Corrupt by Dave Alan Walker

  • Veteran Poet - 1,882 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (4/11/2012 5:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Charles Darkly (1/21/2012 2:29:00 PM)

    Awesome. Simply awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Mack (1/19/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    Dave... I like! I Like! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Herojit Philem (1/19/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    Great poem.... Really this word starting with 'c' made our society worthless without money.. Everywhere money.. For simple thing too.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (1/18/2012 7:01:00 PM)

    There is good, but bad too everywhere and in every profession.
    This is your truth. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,512 Points Pheko Motaung (1/18/2012 2:40:00 PM)

    It's a corrupt world.And this great poem exposes it all.Lovely.Thank you very much sir (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,015 Points Rajendran Muthiah (1/18/2012 1:25:00 PM)

    The evil we do spites back. In two sentences or two stanzas, you have given the everlasting truth.
    Fantastic! Deserves 100% and more. Dragging till the end, you struck with the time-tested fact. Cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (1/18/2012 12:45:00 AM)

    a concise comment on things that go on in so many parts of the world where those in power abuse that duty of care....good and strong, Dave (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 263 Points Supriya Prathapan (1/17/2012 6:56:00 AM)

    Reminds me of the innocent people who are arrested and beaten up by the police and even after being released, they are looked down upon by everyone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jeline Loh Jen-Li (1/16/2012 7:36:00 PM)

    WE've got a good one over here Dave! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Federico del Corazón (1/16/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    evil in bad men takes on all shapes and hides to only show itself to do the devils deed. good poem my friend, let us not forget! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dave James (1/16/2012 2:58:00 PM)

    Good interpretation, well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thaddeus Thierisch (1/16/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    like a snake that eats itself - oh yes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jeffrey Barnes (1/15/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    nice piece on the corruption of power and the damage that it causes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (1/15/2012 4:21:00 PM)

    karma.... violent karma the worst! great piece! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Misses Unknown (1/15/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    thanks for the invite :) your poem is really gooood keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Glenn Gay (1/15/2012 2:53:00 PM)

    how true, how true. Police power sommetimes goes to their head. I have seen it many times. Good Insight (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Binish Cd (1/15/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    that's the reality which most people do not understand...........for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. For the human beings also the same will happen...........as the fate. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Shanaaz Waldien (1/15/2012 6:58:00 AM)

    Well done, Dave! Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (1/15/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    arts - a great way of standing against the snake of corruption; very good! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 15, 2012

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