I have put in your room all you need
If it's deficient now, it's your misdeed.
Your hate, your violence, your greed!
I gave you a mirror that has been cracked.
You! My image in it! Has been hijacked!
Laughing mirror now, as you're off tracked!
I gave you thoughts to frame the laws
You polluted it, now it has many flaws.
Damaged stitching with your own claws!
Now you appear naked and too ungraced
Reset your room, it is still well placed,
Promise, your mirror will be soon replaced.
Hate, violence and greed like vices have captured modern world people and Earth is burning in sorrow, burdens and hatred. This seems to be like a broken mirror. This provokes thought entirely. Replacing the mirror to have beautiful reflection is nice. Promise should be given before God to have peace and love around us. Brilliant poem is excellently penned.10
Very profound write from your mighty pen. Man is weak n full of flaws hence the world is full of problems.
A poem that rhymes beautifully. I gave you a mirror that has been cracked. You! My image in it! Has been hijacked! Laughing mirror now, as you're off tracked! I gave you thoughts to frame the laws You polluted it, now it has many flaws. Damaged stitching with your own claws! Very well done.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant write about the hate, greed and violence of this world, the cracked mirror is a reflection of the ugly truth of the curse of hate, greed and violence! Outstanding write! !