The Days Pass Poem by Emmanuel George Cefai

The Days Pass

Rating: 4.8


The days pass.
And so they do
Relentless.
I only succumb
To their relentlessness.

Friday, December 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 05 December 2020

A well penned poem........ Truly delightful and fabulous.....5 stars*****

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 December 2020

Profound write and thought provoking too. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 December 2020

The days pass. And so they do Relentless. I only succumb To their relentlessness. /// excellently penned; short but wise; congrats for being selected this poem as POD..from me 5*******

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 December 2020

time has no tiredness, has no stoppage, running towards incessantly; but the worldly existence/beings with the time in the realm of exhaustion! yet, the mind of humankind is importunate for the time and but once it succumbs to the time's relentlessness ////

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Quite natural. Congratulations

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Hannatu Adamu 15 December 2020

Short and straight. I like that!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2020

Passing days of life! ! ! ! ! Aging! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Perfection Rocks 15 December 2020

we are aging need to be with my love before we die

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 December 2020

Meaningful write beautifully done. Loved it and congrats.

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