Angelic Warrior


/\the Elements\/ - Poem by Angelic Warrior

Calm and silent is the air,
barely a whisper.
The sky, a heavenly shade of pink,
and soft blue.
The sun is setting on a most beautiful evening,
come back tomorrow my dear friend.

Bathing in the clear water,
absorbing its refreshment.
This water, this lake,
clean and pure.
A valley of blue surrounded by great mountains,
sheltering its inhabitants.

Warm is the fire that burns near by,
casting light for its spectators.
Brilliant it dances,
on the wholesome pine,
devouring its meal and drawing our eyes.
Go on faithful warrior show us the way.

Solid and strong is the Earth under our feet
giving us a path to walk along.
Through ages of old,
it nurtures life,
and a most beautiful home for us all.
Simple and complex, nature will always rule.

Wind, Water, Fire and Earth,
the basis of life,
the controle of our being,
our power and strength,
our kindness and love.
The Elements of Life.


Comments about /\the Elements\/ by Angelic Warrior

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (10/8/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    How wonderfully you put it, 'Wind, Water, Fire and Earth, / the basis of life, / the controle of our being, / our power and strength, / our kindness and love. / The Elements of Life...', it is beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 935 Points Rachel Ann Butler (9/7/2009 1:52:00 PM)

    Solid and strong is the Earth under our feet
    giving us a path to walk along.

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,301 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/5/2009 7:52:00 PM)

    Calm and silent is the air,
    barely a whisper.
    The sky, a heavenly shade of pink,
    and soft blue.
    The sun is setting on a most beautiful evening,
    come back tomorrow my dear friend.

    beautiful gifts from the God to have created such heavenly bodies and joy in it we get... so much impressed by the write....10

    read mine sun.... cool breeze (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (9/5/2009 5:55:00 PM)

    amazing poem.. wonderful.. me love this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (9/5/2009 5:43:00 PM)

    Greatly written piece. So many aspects we seem to take for granted so nicely laid out here. Very well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 5, 2009


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