I see the light fade
in your sea greens
as you ponder
unknown troubles
hidden behind
a sullen smile.
Where do you wander
alone in your mind,
turning away
from a heated touch,
cooling your heels
upon a lonely path.
Come back, sweet lover,
empty is this air
without breathing
life into you.
I miss you more
than we ever were,
return to this room...
I miss you.
3/7/08
Makes me want to take off my sea greens and pot on a robe and sit by a warm fire. GW62
Love your imagery...love your way with words. Who else would write a line like 'I see the light fade in your sea greens...' Great!
a desperate verses from a woman on emptiness...wonderful write.. very good to read. Best Wishes, Ency Bearis
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice play of words in this lovely work...i'm torn between celebrating the genius of this piece and grieving sad atmosphere it radiates