The Expiating Beauty Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

The Expiating Beauty

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Terrible was the onslaught
On passers, by her beauty spot.
Marvelous were her curves
Lovers adulation she deserves.

Sapphires of eyes, arch of lashes
Onlookers heart bit that diminishes,
Traingular nostrils petals of rose
Enchant every one where she goes.

Glow in the eyes why was missing
Rosy lips too were not smiling.
Was she brooding on some pain,
Was she intricate or a person plain.

Had her beauty committed sins,
Compelling her for an expiation! .

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2019

" Lovers adulation she deserves" ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 December 2015

Marvelous were her curves Lovers adulation she deserves. Had her beauty committed sins, Compelling her for an expiation! . Beauty, sin, temptation, all those ideas come in directly or indirectly in your poem. thank you very much . tony

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

Is she Helen of Troy, Cleopatra, Merlin Munroe or our Aiswarya Roy.......? Who ever she is, she is a paragon of beauty, I am sure! Great description!

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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