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(09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

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The Fantasy Land

Sweeping away all the griefs
Turning everyone as heart's thief
Learning ways to dampen the cries
Tying tongues telling the lies
Crossing hills and desert sands
I'm flying towards the fantasy land

Far away from life's gyre
Where love is soul of zephyr
Where only happiness flows
No animosity and no more foes
The simple life becomes so grand
Yes, I have landed in the fantasy land

World here is a benevolent ocean
Everything is in Brownian motion
Freespirits are the sole residents
Everyone is his own president
All compile a beautiful band
Yes, I'm residing in the fantasy land

No brutality and no hidden lies
Honesty and truth here drives
Everyone tries in griefs and cries
Heart sings here merry songs
Even sinners dupe their wrongs
Everyone joins hand to hand
It happens only in the fantasy land

God rejoices all celebrations
Friendship embraces whole nation
Everyone lives to the insignia of The Fantasy Land
Dive to the ocean floor & grasp the dying hand

Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012
Edited: Friday, January 25, 2013


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  • Swetha Vvr (6/21/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    Freespirits are the sole residents
    Everyone is his own president! !

    a poem which longs to wish seeing a pure world! ! this song is wonderful;

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  • Louis Borgo (5/26/2012 7:44:00 PM)

    you connection with the read love the stanza and the line Tying tongues telling the lies keep written 10! ! !

  • Ankita Verma (4/25/2012 12:56:00 PM)

    wow! yours poem is really nice and the poetic lines and rhyme scheme is also great

  • Dhivya Thiyagarajan (4/24/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    really it is a nice poem

  • Jyo Jottypoet (4/23/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    Magical Fantasy: -) Very well written Freespirit Juneja

  • Shikha Shah (4/22/2012 11:28:00 AM)

    so thoughtful! ! ! ! ! !

  • Nivedita Dubey (4/17/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    a good poem.... wonderfully composed!

  • G.R. Gaus (4/16/2012 5:06:00 PM)

    I like the theme of this place you have created, humans living in harmony, well concieved and thought out. I have to agree with Valerie about the second verse. Good writing......

  • Valerie Dohren (4/15/2012 6:16:00 AM)

    Again, a nice poem - I think the second line of the second verse needs looking at, and I don`t know what `brownian motion` is. Otherwise, very good.

  • Dave Walker (4/14/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    A really wonderful poem, like it.

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