Ken e Hall

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***the Floral Petal Dress*** - Poem by Ken e Hall

The cold morning wind clinically
Undresses the flower’s petal dress,
Still standing tall the birth of seeds begins
Their random atmospheric journey,
Pollination primed by the winged midwife,
Rising higher o’er hills and vale for a new life
Twisting and waving to friends flying by.
The sun shows his early warm face as
He’s calming the wind to a gentle lull,
A sign for all the seeds to spiral down
To their resting place where nature has sewn,
Some land right onto a sheep’s ear
A quick shake and their off no fear,
Then more fall on a cow’s tail
With a moo and a flick no problems avail,
They all land safely and will sleep until spring,
Then will wake and grow when the birdies do sing.


Comments about ***the Floral Petal Dress*** by Ken e Hall

  • Rookie - 427 Points Chris Zachariou (8/10/2014 7:35:00 AM)

    Wonderfully written. The regeneration of nature is always a miracle in my eyes and you have captured this in all its beauty. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,998 Points * Sunprincess * (2/5/2014 5:55:00 PM)

    ........so beautiful this write makes me miss spring...I love the touch of
    peacefulness your added...love this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    Wow. Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,754 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (9/3/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    An educational journey. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,205 Points Hans Vr (1/14/2012 6:48:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. The images of the midwife and all others are very well chosen to describe this wonderful part of nature. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,735 Points Ramesh Rai (12/31/2011 10:46:00 PM)

    REALLY AMAZING POEM, WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. WITH KIND REGARDS (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/31/2011 4:41:00 AM)

    Wow, it's an amazing poem! ! ! Top marks! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 30, 2011



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