Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 627 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

The Fog In Life! - Poem by Subbaraman N V

Foggy mist, misty fog
Marvellous manifestation
Of magnificent nature!

Weary winter
The splenderous spring!

The fog
Strong enough to blind
Quite weak to stand
The stare of raising Sun!

The fog in life, problems in life
Strong enough to blind
Cannot stand
The stare of sparkling mind!

Fog deprives
Physical vision
Foggy mind denies
Mental mission!

Comments about The Fog In Life! by Subbaraman N V

  • Rookie - 14 Points Josie Whitehead (1/11/2008 3:03:00 AM)

    You have some wonderful ideas here, but this poem deserves a complete workover to make it a great poem, in my opinion. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 6, 2011

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