The Forbidden Dream Poem by lady grace

The Forbidden Dream

Rating: 5.0


the dream…Waves rush to shore
as your hips sway with glee
into the tides, heap the rhythm
darling..Swing me gently...

cast your spell on the sand
gather your magical moves on stones
sway me against the fire
of sweetened droplets of the morn...

the reverie…as I move tiptoed
with you by my side
skin to skin sweat slippery soaked
lips expression, both wanted to emote...

we dance to the rhythm of the tune
as we kiss all night… all day long
wet lips of joy and lusts
awaits your greedy hungry grasp...

your whispers make me glow
your touch makes me wild
my voice makes you broken
silence… fills the night…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 24 May 2010

Very poetic and very well express...10

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this has a cinematic and poetic appeal or something like that... nice write!

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John Knight 19 May 2010

Naidz - Angel - I love this poem it is BEAUTIFUL. Dream Love is wonderful and enables us to live out our love in Blissful Dreamtime. The sea & shore is a very emotional venue (it is the rhythm of the sea that stirs the heart and soul) . There is a misunderstood magic in LOVE and we can never fully describe it - but we feel it. Love in the Sea with the slipperyness (lovely word) and salty taste of the sae water ameliorates (good word) the sensation of love. Dancing and kissing throughout the night and all day - AWESOME. Whispers and touch - these are the eleements of trus and wonderful love. Thank you for caring and sharing - Love through poetry - JOHN.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 19 May 2010

Oh! What a dream Grace! The love unending, the tie never to be torn. But how did you come out of the trance ! ! Just to communicate with the readers! ! Thank you much. It is the difference of a poets conscious with the general. Write more and give us some more dreams to live with joy in such surroundings of dirt and cruelty. 10+ Apoet Bangla

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