~the Hallway Of Hell~1 Poem by Scarlet .....

~the Hallway Of Hell~1

Rating: 4.0


Sitting in the corner
in the hallway of hell
afraid of the door

Terrified to move her
gaze up from the floor
there is no light
not in this hallway
of which I speak

Only light I see sneaks
out from beneath
that door

Oh god she squeezes
her self tight
trying to release
such fright

Oh god she hates
these nights
door creeks open

Her heart beat
triples form such
fright
lungs tighten
gaze moves up

Blinded by the light
she squints to see
the monster of the night
hidden within the light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uloia Norris Moore 07 November 2007

very good much much better

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hmm, sounds interesting, ill read on....

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Alan Curtis 09 November 2007

Hell yea! ! I like all of tha Hallways of Hell! ! There isnt a poem of u'rs that I dont like and this series of poems r the best n my book. Peace out from North Cali BaBY! ! ! ! !

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 11 November 2007

I'd b stupid not to read the rest... this poem is amazing.

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Marvin Brato 10 May 2008

Hell is where we thought it is when we are crashed by fate, but heaven is where we believe we are after those darks clouds have cleared and light comes as bliss! A 10.

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 March 2008

Scary as Hell to me! GW62

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Melvin Banggollay 12 February 2008

Great poem and expression of imagination. thanks for sharing and best wishes. melvin

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Soul Writer 12 November 2007

Great write hun, good 2 see your back on the writing trail Peace Soul

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broken soul 12 November 2007

+hey there+ another masterpiece.. full of emotions.. two thumbs up.. looking forward to your new poem series..

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