I love the way you take my hand and
Lead me through the lane,
It's amazing how you make me laugh
So don't fell the pain.
A mother's love is the strongest type and
This you cannot deny,
Thank you for always being my light
You are the perfect guide.
I've never thought about much
'I love you' really means.
You've always found the time to listen
To my highs, lows and in betweens
I'll never really understand how
You have the energy to care,
There is no doubt about it I'll always respect
The joy you have to share.
a good thought with and perfect poetic flwo..and very inspiring one...thanks for comments and hope you do litle long to add to my new book....10 +++++
A good dedicational poem. Feelings about mothers are universal. Best Wishes Naseer
Very good Well written Your mummy Could be proud hehe...... its a joke
a sweet poem.. emotional enough and iteresting one..love the idea and expressions...10+++++++++
I would like to make a prediction right here and now....If you continue writing poems of this calibre and you are only 16 now...you are destined to be a great poet in the future. Ishita you have got what it takes don't ever lose it... Regards Alf...tell me when you have written again please.
you have some very distiguished comments here... the phenomena of motherhood defies a definition in the conventional sense you did a very good poem i too wrote a poem on mothers day great cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice dedication there, Ishita...nicely rhyming lines...good piece...i liked...10