The Moment Poem by tamia wells

The Moment

Rating: 2.7


the moment i look in your eyes i fall, the moment you kiss me i melt, the moment you tell me you love me i fall harder, and the moment you say 'goodbye' i regret.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 31 March 2010

It's beautiful. A little restructuring can make it look more beautiful. Keep it up. CP

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tamia wells

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new york, bronx
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