veeraiyah subbulakshmi


the mouse.


The mice are everywhere, must call the piped piper,
The mouse with the long tail and illuminating bunker,
Every home is infested with a few cute device,
That creates unseen emotion that felt in the senses,
People look at the screen and then laughingly happy,
People read the message and get angrily creepy,
People miss the people that they have never seen,
People feel everything in the heads, hearts and in dreams,
With no physical contact and acquaintance,
when modern human communicate through the apps,
When the piped piper program is installed,
People use their fingers, the mouse is discarded.

Submitted: Saturday, September 01, 2012

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  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/5/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    A thorough literary outburst at the bare fact of these times. Let us discard these mice and open the doors of our minds to let the fresh air of some rethinking get in. A good piece indeed Madam.. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (9/2/2012 4:15:00 AM)

    A cute poem about our every day relation with the electronic mouse. Yes soon we'll be without it when technology improves. You have so nicely brought it out. I liked the lines When Piped Piper program is installed Good imagination. Thanks & Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (9/1/2012 3:18:00 PM)

    This is very thoughtful. You have bring to reality the modern friend we relates with daily. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (9/1/2012 3:02:00 PM)

    The electronic mouse has infested every home now and it is also discarded with the arrival of latest inventions. A gentle, humorous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (9/1/2012 3:00:00 PM)

    The electronic mouse has infested every home now and it is also discarded with the arrival of latest inventions. A gentle, humorous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (9/1/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    The mouse seems to be our primary means of communication these days, but what would we do without it now! (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (9/1/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    Veeraiyah, feel you are talking to me.Talking to people I never see!
    Maybe I should go visit a friend in person. (Report) Reply

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