The Phoenix Poem by Heather Burns

The Phoenix

Rating: 4.5


A mythical bird
spirit of fire
filled with
intense desire

Life cycle a
thousand years
drenched in a
thousand tears

Tail of scarlet
and golden hue
experiencing
life like
very few

A nest of twigs
and then
arise from the
flames
and live again

Near the end
it will ignite
reduce to ashes
on a star-studded
night

Another egg forms
and begins
the mythical Phoenix
lives again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 27 September 2013

Nice rhyme and meter with succinct styling and well told story.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013

A beautiful poem. 'Life cycle a thousand years drenched in a thousand tears' Nice!

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Patricia Grantham 03 October 2013

A nice poem of this mythical bird. The Phoenix is depicted and portrayed in many a book. Its legendary life is recycled many times. Lovely.

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Sallam Yassin 01 October 2013

Yes we can reclaim the Life again and we can go ahead with gain / bright

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Dee Corpolongo 01 October 2013

Oh I loved this beautiful poem! ! ! So magical and imaginable, filled with flames of new born strength. Beautiful! ! ! !

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William F Dougherty 28 September 2013

The archetypes of mythology are invariably useful analogies for poem-making.

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